No Purr, No Hiss, Just This

Your eyes,

My eyes.

Space between.

Loud enough.

No purr,

No stir.

In the air,

As I stare

Into your eyes.

No hiss

To notice.

But eyes,

Your eyes-


Now blinking,

Now gazing.

No purr,

No hiss.

Just this.

That kiss

Of eyes

Was bliss

In the skies,

By the moon-

Shining like

The winter sun.

Clouds roar,

Lightning kisses.

We run

Green meadow,

World vanishes.

Clocks stop

Tick tock.

Brown clouds,

Sun smiling,

Ships sailing

Voyage bon,

Yellow shore,

We alone-

Riding waves,

Throwing stones,

Splashing water,

Having fun,

Getting wet,

And sunburn.

No purr,

No hiss.

Just this.

Those eyes,

Dark eyes.

Pounding hearts.

Eyes meet.

Moment departs.


About Zeeshan

We are the twinkle in the eyes of oblivion.


  1. I liked this style. Small, crisp phrases… sing song and rhyme. I like! πŸ™‚

  2. loved the style, n pattern!! πŸ™‚
    awesome bro!!

  3. Maybe it’s just me, but I could recreate every scene in vivid detail, despite very few clues from you! πŸ˜›
    That’s the trait of a great poet…brilliant beyond words Zee!

    • zee

      Well, I am pleased like anything by your sweet words but I need to say this that “poem like beauty lies in the mind of the beholder” !! πŸ™‚

  4. No purr.
    No hiss.
    Just this, AWESOME ❀

  5. I’m in love with this poem. πŸ™‚

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