Far Away

Meeting you is like walking down

On a lonely windy silver night

Without any slippers on my feet;

Like walking with the beautiful moon

That is hiding half beneath the clouds

And beneath the cedar boughs.

And every naked step, it moves quick

Amidst the branches and the leaves.

I see you, your deep eyes I realise,

And think your thoughts aloud,

And talk to you about pearls and lies.

But still we float in lonely space

Far away from each other.


About Zeeshan

We are the twinkle in the eyes of oblivion.


  1. azhar hussain

    nice thot,very well written,could have had a rhyming effect.

  2. everakid

    yeah, the lack of a rhyme scheme does have an effect on the poem… It misses a song-like quality, but adds more feel, giving it a sort of meandering effect, which goes well with the thought. I like it. 🙂

    • zee

      Glad that you like it. 🙂 Yeah, the absence of a rhyme scheme does give a strange effect to a poem. It’s gud that it did to this one!! 🙂

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )


Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: